Comments on: volt https://www.cynthianewberrymartin.com/2012/01/volt/ Catching Days Fri, 03 Feb 2012 02:50:15 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.1.3 By: cynthia https://www.cynthianewberrymartin.com/2012/01/volt/#comment-3455 Fri, 03 Feb 2012 02:50:15 +0000 http://catchingdays.cynthianewberrymartin.com/?p=9655#comment-3455 In reply to Sarah Laurence.

I agree-the juxtaposition is shocking. But I don’t consider sharing the first four paragraphs of a 36-page story a spoiler. Otherwise, I would have alerted the reader. The story is what happens to Winslow after these first paragraphs.

]]> By: Sarah Laurence https://www.cynthianewberrymartin.com/2012/01/volt/#comment-3454 Wed, 01 Feb 2012 19:25:18 +0000 http://catchingdays.cynthianewberrymartin.com/?p=9655#comment-3454 Wow, beautiful writing and horrible tale! The juxtaposition is quite shocking. I enjoyed the close line analysis of the story even with the spoiler.

]]> By: cynthia https://www.cynthianewberrymartin.com/2012/01/volt/#comment-3453 Sat, 28 Jan 2012 18:24:48 +0000 http://catchingdays.cynthianewberrymartin.com/?p=9655#comment-3453 In reply to Darrelyn Saloom.

Amazing writing, isn’t it?

]]> By: Darrelyn Saloom https://www.cynthianewberrymartin.com/2012/01/volt/#comment-3452 Thu, 26 Jan 2012 23:45:28 +0000 http://catchingdays.cynthianewberrymartin.com/?p=9655#comment-3452 Verbs + simile = emotion all right. I’m too choked up to type.

]]> By: Volt — Contrary Blog https://www.cynthianewberrymartin.com/2012/01/volt/#comment-3451 Thu, 26 Jan 2012 16:15:26 +0000 http://catchingdays.cynthianewberrymartin.com/?p=9655#comment-3451 […] at Catching Days Cancel […]

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